lunes, 18 de mayo de 2009

The Legend Of Dan Schneider

The Legend Of Dan Schneider

Once upon a time, there was a woman that was named: Mendis. She was a beautiful woman, and the god Warpo was in love of her. When Mendis was 25 years old, Warpo called her and said her to marry. Mendis accepted and they married. After 7 years , they had a son. They called him Dan Schneider, Warpo wanted that his son could be a very good warrior and an excelent semigod.

When he was 21 years old, Mendis decided to put him in an academy, Mendis and Warpo wanted him to use swords, shield and arrows, but especially Warpo wanted him to train more in the use of arrows. One day, in the town Dan saw that Sarta and Laithens were in war. Dan told this to his father, and Warpo without thinking it, said Dan to go. Dan and his family lived in Retaca, and in that time, Retaca and Sarta were allies, so it was clear that Retaca will help Sarta. When Dan was entering the ship, Mendis stopped him and told him that he will have to found some specific objects for going to war.His first objective was to find Tantos, and his mirmidons to help Sarta, but before that, he had to make some things. First he had to go to the Vermillion forest, it was a very dangerous forest, that was ubicated in an island in the way to Laithens., there he had to find the shield of Pofemo. It was a very powerful shield that Pofemo did before dying and it was supposed that Warpo ordered him to make it. Dan knew that that island was the old armery of Pofemo and his brothers.

Dan though it will be easy because he heared that the island was desert, that the island was only habitated with animals. When he arrived he start walking by all the island. After 3 hours of hard walking, not saying nothing he decided to stop. When he wake up he continue walking,, and after an hour he finally found it, the secret army of Pofemo. When he was entering the armery an arrow pass in front of his face, he was being attacked so he tun for protection. While he was being attacked by the arrows, he could see that they were elfs. He had no choice, he had to run to the armery and took the shield, because if he took it he could protect form the arrows.He decided that he will do it. He waited the elfs to recharge their arrows, and when they do it, he started.He ran as fast as he can, finally he could see it, the great shield lying in that dirty wall, he only had some cuts, he was quiet, but in his mind he was very surprised. He took the shield quickly and he could fell its power, so he exit the armery very calm, blocking the arrows of like they were candies. So then, he ran and boarded his ship and go away.






His new adventure was to travel to tha island of Tantos to have his sword, it was in the way of Sarta-Laithens-Retaca, when he was near the island he could see, that it was full of guards, when he arrived, he said that he wanted to talk with Tantos, no one of the guards stop him, Dan though it was because fo the shield. Then he arrived to Tantos campament, where Tantos was sit. Dan and Tantos talked a long time, Dan told him that Sarta and Laithens were in war, and he needed his sword to fight. Tantos think about it a long time, finally he said yes, bu only with oone condition; what? Dan asked, that you return here alive and give me my sword personal.

Dan went out of the shop, and then he had to go to Decefos, to have the helmet of Calos, that only could be use by a semigod. When we arrived to the city he coul see that the pèople were running and shuting, so Dan decided to discover what was going on. After some minutes, he discover that the tiger of Ethea( a mythological creature) was causing disasters in all the city. Dan knew taht with one roar, the beast could destroy a complete construction. But Dan remebered that he haa the shield of Virgo( name of the shield of Pofemos) and that if he blocked he will not go flying. Dan plan was that he will block, junp and attack, he started running near the beast, and that was the moment when Ethea roar, and for Dan`s surprise the shield went flying. Dan now has no choice, he will have to dodge, so he hide in tha backside of a construction, when Ethea rar Dan moved to the next construction, and he continue like that, then when was very near he dodge, but he fall and the roar blow his sword away. Dan didn`t know what to do, he observe and he could see the helmet of Calos, under the ruins of a temple.Dan has a new plan, he was sure that the power of the helmet will stop easily the roars of Ethea,and if he put the helmet in the way of the roars he could stop them. So Dan waited to Ethea`s roar, but he observe that this time he will have to ve more faster. So Dan ran (Ethe roar) and he pass to the other construction quickly, he took the helmet like the speed of light, he wanted to contemplate it but he had no time. S Dan put the helmet in his head, he stilled in front of Ethea he put his helmet in front, and Ethea roar and as Dan said the roar went back to Ethe and Ethea flew away. The citizens of Mecefos, were very happy and congratulate Dan, so they gave him food, and provicions for his next trip.Now he had to go Nicimpa, ubicated in Teropoloneso., to find the brazelets of Dulity( brazelets of and old god, more stronger than 1,000 swords.

When he arrived at Nicimpa he start asking the people if they had seen the brazelet of Dulity, but nobody answer him for a long time. Finally a guardian told him that the brazalets were goingto be given to the winner of an Oplon race(Oplon was a very heavy shield, that was used for runnin in ancient Greece). So Dan went to enter the race, this tournament was divided into 10 races, Dan only win 7 of them, but it was ligic that, like he won 7 of 10 races he will have the brazalets, and it was what Dan though. Dan said in his mind that this was the boring adventure of all the ones he had lived.




Now Dan had to travel to Tusos, in Pleta. There we will have to ask the god Lesto to build him an armor, like the one he made for Tantos. Dan start searching for the temple, and finally he found it. It was a big temple Dan said, and he walk through it like an specie of "turist", then he discover the room were people asked Lesto for their wishes. When Dan's turn arrived he was very afraid, because he could hear the vice of the god but couldn't see him. Dan said hello, in a soft oice, and from a wall, a strong voice sound saying: What do you want? Dan was afraid, so he asked quickly to Lesto that if he could make an armor for him. Lesto answer yes, but asked Dan for a reazon. Dan start thinking and at the same time getting bored, so h said: My father is Warpo. Lesto stay quiet and then said to Dan: if you answer this question, I will made you the armor you want. Lesto continue: if you are the son of Warpo, whi is your step-sister? Dan was very excited, thinking: pfff, this is too easy, so he said: Mersefone. Lesto congratulate him and said to Dan to came in three days, because his armor will be ready.

Now Dan had to return to Mecesfos, because he had to talk with the god Acroto, in his temple, there were another temples of Acroto but in Mecesfos was the only one were Acroto talked with people. Dan enter and quickly he could see Acroto`s face, so he asked: Acroto, can you give me some of your arrows and a bow please? Acroto answered: but only if you answered this question. Tell me a characterisitc of the Sartans..... Dan think a long time, and finally he answered: a characteristis is that when their are kids, their are bringed to an academy and train until they became soldiers. Acroto conformed and saaid Dan to come in 2 days. While that days passed, Dan visited all parts of Mecesfos, seiing their culture, their jobs and all that. Then when the second day came, Dan went to Acroto's palace, he could not see Avrto's face like the last time, but he saw the bow and the arrows, so he took them and said in his mind: thank you. The next day he arrived at Tusos, he went to the temple and take his armor and he said goodbye to Lesto. Now he had to return to Retaca, he boarded a ship and went to the campaments of Sarta and Retaca, in Magna Pleta, were the war should take place. When Dan and the other Retacan soldiers arrived, Dan went to Memao's campament; the commander of Sarta and it's king. Memao said to Dan that the Retacan army will fight with the soldiers of Laithens. The supposed number of soldiers in the total war were like this:

-Retaca: 27,000 soldiers.
-Sarta: 63,000 soldiers.
-Laithens: 88,000 soldiers
-Miconasis:34,000 soldiers( allies of Laithens)

So Memao's plan was that the Retacans will attakc first and when they all die, the Sartans will kill the rest. So the war started , Retaca satrted with a good strategy, Retacans fought with all they had, arrows, swords etc, and their enemies were surprised with their excellent strategies. The war lasted 23 years, Dan and all the Retacans died in the eleventh day,. Dan died by 5 arrows that falled in his body.

Epilogue

The war was bout of 23 days, the 11th day Dan Schneider die by 5 arrows, and all the Retacans also die. HIs armor was kept in the Mrympus(house of the gods) and the swrod was give back to Tantos, we was so dissapointed. Cassimiro wrote about Dan, in his book the Danosea, describes the war of Anparta(War betwween Sarta and Laithens) he said that Dan killed 23,485 soldiers by his own in the war, he also wrote that he died with 2 arrows in his right leg, 1 in his right arm and and in his up-body. The shield was given to the elfs again, the brazalets were sended to Warpo, the helmet stayed woth Calos and the bow and arrows were given back to Acroto. Cassimiro also wrtoe that Dan's spirit now is the guard of Warpo in the underworld.

THE END.

By Daiel Franco 6A

















































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